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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation letter

Hi guys, my letter is almost finish.
Can you please help me completing this paragraph?
i feel like i should rephrase it:

Studying biology is my obvious choice. My life experiences and interests have led me in that direction. I feel empowered being a biology student as I begin to understand and unravel the essence of life
In addition, I have diversified fields of interest, including pottery, drawing, photography and, quite differently, computer science. I hope to be in a position to combine biology with some of these fields in the future.

Thanks you!
  

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Biology is my obvious choice: my life experiences and main interests have led me in that direction. I feel empowered as a biology student, as I begin to understand and unravel the essence of life. Nevertheless, I have other interests, including pottery, drawing, photography and computer science.

  • Biology is my obvious choice: my life experiences and main interests have led me in that direction.
  • I feel empowered as a biology student, as I begin to understand and unravel the essence of life.
  • Nevertheless, I have other interests, including pottery, drawing, photography and computer science.
  • I hope to be able to combine some of these interests with natural science in the future.
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Biology is my obvious choice: my life experiences and main interests have led me in that direction. I feel empowered as a biology student, as I begin to understand and unravel the essence of life.

Nevertheless, I have other interests, including pottery, drawing, photography and computer science. I hope to be able to combine some of these interests with natural science in the fut

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