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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Motivation Letter

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Dear Sirs/Madams:
During the five years (2003-2008) I have been studied Mathematic support and Administrating Informational systems in Immanuel Kant Baltic State University, Russia. I chose this area partly to be more familiar with world of computers, but also because I was increasingly fascinated by developments in this sphere. This formed the basics of my perseverance towards achieving in-depth knowledge through analytic approach.
After graduation I started to work in the Banking area. This experience has enabled me to acquire a lot of technical practice in management and to obtain an insight about companies’ objectives. Due to my professional career I have received professional re-qualification in Finance and Banking and in Appraisal Services. There I found business studies, especially management, extremely interesting and very exciting.
For the past two years (2011-2013) I have internship in University of Algarve (Erasmus Mundus program, Ph.D.) and in 2013 I applied for Ph.D. candidate in Economic and Entrepreneur Sciences. During my internship I had the chance to develop technical writing skills and the ability to present details of my research to various audiences, therefore preparing me for communication in a science and business environment. Overall, this experience made me more convinced that I really would like to undertake research in management and that I am able to adopt easily to any atmosphere and successfully be part of a team.
I am currently doing research in game-based learning environment. I am investigating the effectiveness of business simulation games Cesim Global Challenge and Cesim SimBrand, that are used in the business course units in University of Algarve. This is something I find very interesting and different from what I have done before. In these days full the uncertainty and changes in economics and technology, I believe that future management must be supported by a strong academic foundation and hand-on experience, of how to guide companies through these challenging times. To this date I have two papers in conference proceedings with some interesting results.
My combined love of research makes me to consider a career in academia; the PhD is not only the unique opportunity to enter the world of research, but also a mandatory condition to secure an academic post, my principal objective. I have always enjoyed teaching.
I wish to participate in this programme “Rede dos Doctorantes”(name is in Portuguese); and believe that the combination of my experience and training is well-suited to the PhD position . Please find enclosed a copy of my resume with additional information about my qualifications. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to receiving your reply.
  

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  • Here are some suggestions: During the For five years, from 2003 to 2008 , I have been studied Mathematic (I don't understand this.
  • Mathematics is an academic discipline, mathematical is an adjective, but it does not go with "support") support and Administrating Informational systems a t Immanuel Kant Baltic State University, Russia.
  • I chose this area partly to be more familiar with world of computers, but also because I was increasingly fascinated by developments in this sphere (Not clear what you mean.
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  • This formed the basis basics of my perseverance towards achieving in-depth knowledge through an analytic approach.
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During the For five years, from 2003 to 2008, I have been studied Mathematic (I don't understand this. Mathematics is an academic discipline, mathematical is an adjective, but it does not go with "support") support and Administrating Informational systems at Immanuel Kant Baltic State University, Russia.

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