Motivation letter

i would like to help me to corect this motivation letter either in grammar mistakes or the writing structure.

it is required for the aplication proccess of student visa in embasy

Dear Sir or Madame,

I have been very fortunate to have been accepted at Berlin University to continue my studies in Master of Business Administration programme.
I am writing to give the reasons why I chose this university, and this degree program, and to request approval for a student visa for (dates).

The reason I applied in Berlin University is that I greatly admire the German university system. German universities are internationally renowned and are the largest university systems in Europe and they are leaders in research and teaching, so their programs are structured in a way that directly links theory with practice.
German universities are famous for their first-class service for international students and services are in place to help students feel immediately at home, comfortable and familiar with the German way of life.

The reason that I selected Berlin University is that it, of all German institutions, offers a specialized MBA programme that is appealing to me. Also its great faculty and perfect facilities are a fitting place to perform studies.

During my post educational years I studied Business Administration with specialization in International Business & European Affairs at the American College of Barcelona I developed a sound and very broad business knowledge.
The sector of Business Administration has captured my interest and i have decided to specialize in this field. I found the MBA program to be very suiting and i am sure i would strongly enrich my future plans and help me in my prospective career.

The international approach also suits my previous studies of International Business. I have gathered experience abroad as I lived, studied and worked for 10 years in Spain, and worked for 2 years in Skopia . Each experience made it easier for me to adopt to a totally new situation. To increase my international experience I have chosen to continue my studies at Berlin University.

I am positive that i will be a successful prospective graduate. Due to my previous education and work experience i have a solid background to build upon. My international experience made me very adaptable at all kinds of situations. I am fluent in English and Spanish and my native language is Macedonian. I also plan to increase German knowledge intensively .

I am married to a Spanish citizen that is living in Berlin and other family. As well I have spent considerable time in X city as e turist. Also not only am I familiar with the city, but I also adore it. Furthermore, I know the university has an excellent reputation in Business Administration. The knowledge and experience I plan to gain at Frankfurt University will help me to achieve my goals in my future career.

Thank you for considering my request.

Sincerely,