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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Motivation letter
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Dear Sir or Madam,
With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it would enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become its integral part. I strongly believe that both my educational background and interpersonal skills make me a very good candidate for the program.
Since 2009 I have been studying Finance at . At the end of this academic year (July) I will graduate with honors my Bachelor degree in Economics with a Financial Economics major.
During this Masters I would like to study abroad for a couple months because that has been always one of my wishes. My main motivations for studying abroad are that I would like to meet new people and experience other cultures, learn another language and experience another educational system.
I am fortunate to have an exciting opportunity to improve skills as an intern in Small Business Department of the Head office of Universal Bank. I was responsible for documentation and mail processing, preparation of information and reference materials, providing documents for transferring to Legal Department and keeping statistics on the work done. Moreover there I gained good communication and time management skills and felling of team spirit.
This year I won the second place in national conference "Macro-stabilizers in the regulation of economic cycles" with my presentation on "Fiscal Modernization Service of Ukraine". I also participated in annual 80 th University conference on Insurance.
Complementing my strong academic performance are my advanced skills in leadership and communication. For 4 years during my studies, I've been the leader of the academic group responsible for 23 students. I consider myself a leader and at the same time a good co-worker.
I am confident that overall opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me an opportunity to gain world class education and help me become an excellent world citizen. I am sure that I will match all the credentials and will be able to maintain high standards at your university.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.
With regards,
Dear Sir or Madam,
With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it would enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become its integral part. I strongly believe that both my educational background and interpersonal skills make me a very good candidate for the program.
Since 2009 I have been studying Finance at . At the end of this academic year (July) I will graduate with honors my Bachelor degree in Economics with a Financial Economics major.
During this Masters I would like to study abroad for a couple months because that has been always one of my wishes. My main motivations for studying abroad are that I would like to meet new people and experience other cultures, learn another language and experience another educational system.
I am fortunate to have an exciting opportunity to improve skills as an intern in Small Business Department of the Head office of Universal Bank. I was responsible for documentation and mail processing, preparation of information and reference materials, providing documents for transferring to Legal Department and keeping statistics on the work done. Moreover there I gained good communication and time management skills and felling of team spirit.
This year I won the second place in national conference "Macro-stabilizers in the regulation of economic cycles" with my presentation on "Fiscal Modernization Service of Ukraine". I also participated in annual 80 th University conference on Insurance.
Complementing my strong academic performance are my advanced skills in leadership and communication. For 4 years during my studies, I've been the leader of the academic group responsible for 23 students. I consider myself a leader and at the same time a good co-worker.
I am confident that overall opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me an opportunity to gain world class education and help me become an excellent world citizen. I am sure that I will match all the credentials and will be able to maintain high standards at your university.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.
With regards,
Top answer
Dear Sir or Madam, With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it will enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become an integral part.
- Dear Sir or Madam, With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///.
- I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it will enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career.
- It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become an integral part.
- I strongly believe that both my educational background and interpersonal skills make me a very good candidate for the program.
- Since 2009, I have been studying Finance at .
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Dear Sir or Madam,
With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it will enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become an integral part. I strongly believe that both my educational background and interpersonal skills make
With this letter I'd like to express my desire to study at ///. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it will enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. It is important for me to join the student community of () and to become an integral part. I strongly believe that both my educational background and interpersonal skills make
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