0
LikeLanguages Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Motivation Letter
Hello guys ! I need your help in correcting my motivation letter. It will be very kind from your part to have a quick look on the text, correct grammar mistakes, check the coherences, logic and content of the text. I will really appreciate your help ! Thank you very much !
Study plan
Traveling and studying foreign languages is a passion throughout my life. Discover new countries, meet interesting people and face to different culture is expanding mind and make to think different. It has stayed as my hobby and interest until participating my second Olympic games in London this year. After thorough introspection of my strengths and interests, I had realized that I want to be a part of tourism industry and make a career in this field.
I have graduate University and obtained Russian Specialist Diploma with honors in Philology as a teacher of Chinese language and literature. As studying languages, by my 23 years old I can speak 4 languages: Russian, Chinese, French, English and intended to extend my language knowledge further. During my University Studies I had been participating in two exchange programs abroad in China and France. Living abroad in different parts of the world, provided me a chance to develop myself as a person, face to new challenges, improve my language skills. In addition, I had an opportunity to compare the way of life of these two totally different countries. After this experience, during communication with other people I think about opponent first and try to act considering his cultural speciality. Being abroad and living in multicultural environment taught me to adopt in different conditions and adjust in any situations. I have met a lot of people from all over the world, some of them become my friends and I do all my best to stay in touch with them.
After graduation the University, I have been working in a Traditional Chinese medicine centre as an interpreter. I worked with all kinds of patients with different ages, social status and more important individual health condition. This job taught me to pay individual attention, try to find a clue personally, be patient, polite, open and welcome. I had working experience abroad as well. Accompanying a group of people in purchasing equipments in Republic of China, one of my responsibilities was making an itinerary, guide and organizing everyday life during the journey. Besides developed my professional skills in translating I could improve my organizational skills.
I choose Postgraduate program in International hospitality for several reasons. The first reason is that XXX is ranking among the best hospitality schools worldwide. Another important reason is that Switzerland is one of the world's most stable country. I should say, that it was important to me to choose especially French-speaken part of Switzerland, to strengthen language skills. Besides, beautiful scenery and the campus isolated life, provides more opportunity to focus on education better.
I am ready to learn new things and step into the next level in my life. I expect that my language knowledge skills and my professional background are quite beneficial to make me a very good candidate for this program. I strongly believe that studying at XXX will develop me as a person, professional and it will be an excellent start for an ambitious career in tourism industry.
Study plan
Traveling and studying foreign languages is a passion throughout my life. Discover new countries, meet interesting people and face to different culture is expanding mind and make to think different. It has stayed as my hobby and interest until participating my second Olympic games in London this year. After thorough introspection of my strengths and interests, I had realized that I want to be a part of tourism industry and make a career in this field.
I have graduate University and obtained Russian Specialist Diploma with honors in Philology as a teacher of Chinese language and literature. As studying languages, by my 23 years old I can speak 4 languages: Russian, Chinese, French, English and intended to extend my language knowledge further. During my University Studies I had been participating in two exchange programs abroad in China and France. Living abroad in different parts of the world, provided me a chance to develop myself as a person, face to new challenges, improve my language skills. In addition, I had an opportunity to compare the way of life of these two totally different countries. After this experience, during communication with other people I think about opponent first and try to act considering his cultural speciality. Being abroad and living in multicultural environment taught me to adopt in different conditions and adjust in any situations. I have met a lot of people from all over the world, some of them become my friends and I do all my best to stay in touch with them.
After graduation the University, I have been working in a Traditional Chinese medicine centre as an interpreter. I worked with all kinds of patients with different ages, social status and more important individual health condition. This job taught me to pay individual attention, try to find a clue personally, be patient, polite, open and welcome. I had working experience abroad as well. Accompanying a group of people in purchasing equipments in Republic of China, one of my responsibilities was making an itinerary, guide and organizing everyday life during the journey. Besides developed my professional skills in translating I could improve my organizational skills.
I choose Postgraduate program in International hospitality for several reasons. The first reason is that XXX is ranking among the best hospitality schools worldwide. Another important reason is that Switzerland is one of the world's most stable country. I should say, that it was important to me to choose especially French-speaken part of Switzerland, to strengthen language skills. Besides, beautiful scenery and the campus isolated life, provides more opportunity to focus on education better.
I am ready to learn new things and step into the next level in my life. I expect that my language knowledge skills and my professional background are quite beneficial to make me a very good candidate for this program. I strongly believe that studying at XXX will develop me as a person, professional and it will be an excellent start for an ambitious career in tourism industry.
Top answer
Hi, I corrected your letter as seen below: Traveling and studying foreign languages has been a passion throughout my life. Discovering new countries, meeting interesting people, and facing different cultures expands mind and makes me think differently. It had stayed as only my hobby and interest until participating in my second Olympic games in London this year.
- Hi, I corrected your letter as seen below: Traveling and studying foreign languages has been a passion throughout my life.
- Discovering new countries, meeting interesting people, and facing different cultures expands mind and makes me think differently.
- It had stayed as only my hobby and interest until participating in my second Olympic games in London this year.
- After a thorough introspection of my strengths and interests, I realized that I want to be a part of tourism industry and make a career in this field.
- I have graduated from university and obtained a Russian Specialist Diploma with honors in Philology as a teacher of Chinese language and literature.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
2 Answers
0
Hi, I corrected your letter as seen below:
Traveling and studying foreign languages has been a passion throughout my life. Discovering new countries, meeting interesting people, and facing different cultures expands mind and makes me think differently. It had stayed as only my hobby and interest until participating in my second Olympic games in London this year. After a thorough introspec
Traveling and studying foreign languages has been a passion throughout my life. Discovering new countries, meeting interesting people, and facing different cultures expands mind and makes me think differently. It had stayed as only my hobby and interest until participating in my second Olympic games in London this year. After a thorough introspec
00
Shi Aina thank you very much ! This is very helpful! Wish you good luck as well !
0
Related Questions