Hi David, I corrected some mistakes and changed some wording, as seen below: The biggest reason why I desire to do my traineeship at xx is to enhance and deepen my practical skills and knowledge within xx environment, which will help me acquire both unique and modern principles of working experience. I choose this program mainly because working with professionals will help me obtain a broader and deeper knowledge and skills in this field. In addition, I am applying because living in XX environment is something I want to do to become familiar with what is called the `Western Value of life`.
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