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Lilu2012 Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter
Hi! I just wanted have some comeents on my motivation letter to enter University. Any suggestions will be appriciated! Many thanks!
It Looks Like this Letter of Motivation to enter a Master Degree program „Modern East Asian Studies“.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies. I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when Asian economy growing very rapidly, this knowledge will be essential in my future carrier. My aim is to make a successful carrier in International Business or Economic.
I have been living and working in Singapore for more than 5 years. Within my years spent here I was already given the opportunity to face the challenges of living in an Asian country and to gain cross-cultural competence. Furthermore I improved my English and have now a good command of speaking and writing in English. In Singapore I am engaged in tourist and events business. During my employment I gained experience in organization of large group and height-scale events, including government tours. I developed and executed cultural program for APEC Forum delegates in Singapore, was involved in numerous official visit to Singapore from Russia. I also took part in organization of Inaugural Youth Olympic games, held in Singapore in 2010 as a liaison officer to an IOC member. My job here is very interesting and challenging but it requires more knowledge that I only can get from reputable European University.
I have Bachelor’s Degree from a University in Ukraine, where I studied Management of Organization. But I think that the knowledge that I received in the University is very limited to work in International Business. I also strongly believe that person must constantly upgrade his education level in order to succeed in our competitive world.
I choose to pursue Master Degree in Germany because I have always been attracted to Germany, it’s culture, lifestyle, people and I would love the opportunity to live and study there for several years. Furthermore I spent one year in Germany from 2004 to 2005 in au-pair program and I can speak some German. Moreover my elder sister lives in Germany with her family. And they will give me necessary support all the way through my study terms.
After completing the Master's Program, I plan to continue my education and obtain a Ph.D. in Management or International Business. I believe that Master Program opens doors and provides the modern manager with the tools needed to identify new business opportunities and threats. And I am confident that the Master’s Program offered by Johann Wolfgang Goethe-University will provide me the knowledge, confidence, and contacts to realize my dreams.
Sincerely,
It Looks Like this Letter of Motivation to enter a Master Degree program „Modern East Asian Studies“.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies. I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when Asian economy growing very rapidly, this knowledge will be essential in my future carrier. My aim is to make a successful carrier in International Business or Economic.
I have been living and working in Singapore for more than 5 years. Within my years spent here I was already given the opportunity to face the challenges of living in an Asian country and to gain cross-cultural competence. Furthermore I improved my English and have now a good command of speaking and writing in English. In Singapore I am engaged in tourist and events business. During my employment I gained experience in organization of large group and height-scale events, including government tours. I developed and executed cultural program for APEC Forum delegates in Singapore, was involved in numerous official visit to Singapore from Russia. I also took part in organization of Inaugural Youth Olympic games, held in Singapore in 2010 as a liaison officer to an IOC member. My job here is very interesting and challenging but it requires more knowledge that I only can get from reputable European University.
I have Bachelor’s Degree from a University in Ukraine, where I studied Management of Organization. But I think that the knowledge that I received in the University is very limited to work in International Business. I also strongly believe that person must constantly upgrade his education level in order to succeed in our competitive world.
I choose to pursue Master Degree in Germany because I have always been attracted to Germany, it’s culture, lifestyle, people and I would love the opportunity to live and study there for several years. Furthermore I spent one year in Germany from 2004 to 2005 in au-pair program and I can speak some German. Moreover my elder sister lives in Germany with her family. And they will give me necessary support all the way through my study terms.
After completing the Master's Program, I plan to continue my education and obtain a Ph.D. in Management or International Business. I believe that Master Program opens doors and provides the modern manager with the tools needed to identify new business opportunities and threats. And I am confident that the Master’s Program offered by Johann Wolfgang Goethe-University will provide me the knowledge, confidence, and contacts to realize my dreams.
Sincerely,
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Hi Lilu, I made some corrections and changed some wording in the letter, as seen below, otherwise it is written very well: Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies. I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when the Asian economy is growing very rapidly, this knowledge will be essential in my future career. My aim is to make a successful career in International Business or Economics.
- Hi Lilu, I made some corrections and changed some wording in the letter, as seen below, otherwise it is written very well: Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies.
- I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when the Asian economy is growing very rapidly, this knowledge will be essential in my future career.
- My aim is to make a successful career in International Business or Economics.
- I have been living and working in Singapore for more than 5 years.
- Within my years spent here I was already given the opportunity to face the challenges of living in an Asian country and to gain cross-cultural understanding.
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Hi Lilu,
I made some corrections and changed some wording in the letter, as seen below, otherwise it is written very well:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies. I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when the Asian economy is growing very rapidly, this knowledg
I made some corrections and changed some wording in the letter, as seen below, otherwise it is written very well:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for Master Degree Program in Modern East Asian Studies. I am very interested to study in this course, because I believe that in our modern world, when the Asian economy is growing very rapidly, this knowledg
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