MOTIVATION LETTER!

Hi everyone!
I 'd like to apply Master programme in Netherland, and, as the most of people, I have written my Letter form.
Here it is, and i wish you could help me with grammar or some advice about.

Dear Sir or Madam,
Hereby I would like to apply for bla bla bla in Eindhoven starting on September 2012. I gradueted in December 2011 at bal bla bla Industrial Design with a score of bla bla on blabla. In this three years courses, I learn how to plan the creation of object and product, from ideas’s develop to concrete material, maturing interest for people’s actions on daily life. All my concepts were focusing on use of an object, solving problem of usability. Now it’s time to develop my ideas with personal features.
During University I improved the use of 3D-modeling and Render platform, my drawing skills and post-production’s main features. I learned also to build a mock-up especially with paper, my favourite material, and the importance of a physic feedback. We used to work in group of students and at least grow up self concepts. I also worked in Architect Studio bla bla bla where we developped new products of lights, studying new way of illumination. Here we built mock-ups as the main way to represent our ideas.
In this Master’s course I wish to learn more about design and about combination of social, individual and material orentation as well. My hope is to discover my personal way to work by, accompanied by important personalities who are teaching in Design Academy.

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and I don't know how to end...

thank you all!

chiara