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Mandrious Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation Letter

hi can you please correct this letter for me please.
Monash South Africa
144 Peter Road
Ruimsig
South Africa
Johannesburg/Gauteng

Dear Sir/Madam

Bursary Motivation Letter

I am writing this letter with intentions to apply for a bursary to assist me in my educational development.
My name is Fatima Mandrious Solomons i am currently enrolled in your institution for Bachelor of Public Health.
I am suffering with shortage of financial resource. It is basic barrier which keeps me out for educational opportunities.

I want to be a recipient of your bursary program to continue my educational smoothly.
I will be very glad to accept it and pledge to do my best to surprise your expectations to me.
I am a goal-oriented,quality minded student and have an excellent educational records.
It is all credit to my school administration and teachers who maintain my educational status and
help me to excel in some field of education.

I am looking forward toward your positve response. I hope that you will merit your preferential attention to my application.
Thank you in anticipation of considering my application.

Yours sincerely
Fatima Solomons
  

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If you are sending them a formal letter, you should put your address in the top-right side of the page ---------------> (same/similar format as the Monash one). Monash South Africa 144 Peter Road Ruimsig 1724 Gauteng (Fill in the date) Dear Sir/Madam Bursary Motivation Letter Note: in the address above, if you take out Jo'burg & put in the postal code after Ruimsig, then you need only put Gauteng on the line below - don't really need South Africa as they're also based in SA. ID=5 I haven't played around with your ideas - if you can include some positive educational achievements up to this point, it may be worth putting them in ; I've mainly corrected where I felt necessary.

  • If you are sending them a formal letter, you should put your address in the top-right side of the page ---------------> (same/similar format as the Monash one).
  • Monash South Africa 144 Peter Road Ruimsig 1724 Gauteng (Fill in the date) Dear Sir/Madam Bursary Motivation Letter Note: in the address above, if you take out Jo'burg & put in the postal code after Ruimsig, then you need only put Gauteng on the line below - don't really need South Africa as they're also based in SA.
  • ID=5 I haven't played around with your ideas - if you can include some positive educational achievements up to this point, it may be worth putting them in ; I've mainly corrected where I felt necessary.
  • (After your heading): I am writing this letter with the intention of applying for a bursary to assist me in my educational development.
  • I am currently enrolled in your institution for Bachelor of Public Health, and suffer from a shortage of financial resources.
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If you are sending them a formal letter, you should put your address in the top-right side of the page --------------->
(same/similar format as the Monash one).

Monash South Africa
144 Peter Road
Ruimsig 1724
Gauteng

(Fill in the date)

Dear Sir/Madam
Bursary Motivation Letter

Note: in the address above, if you take out Jo'burg &

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