Motivation Letter

hi can you please correct this letter for me please.
Monash South Africa
144 Peter Road
Ruimsig
South Africa
Johannesburg/Gauteng

Dear Sir/Madam

Bursary Motivation Letter

I am writing this letter with intentions to apply for a bursary to assist me in my educational development.
My name is Fatima Mandrious Solomons,i am currently enrolled in your institution for Bachelor of Public Health.
I am suffering with shortage of finacial resource.It is basic barrier which keeps me out for educational opportunities.

I want to be a recipient of your bursary program to continue my educational smoothly.
I wil be very glad to accept it and pledge to do my best to suprise your expactations to me.
I am a goal-oriented,quality minded student and have an exellent educational records.
It is all credit to my school administration and teachers who maintain my educational status and
help me to execl in some field of education.

I am looking forward toward your positve response.I hope that you will merit your preferential attention to my application.
Thank you in anticipation of considering my application.

Your sincerely
Fathima Solomons