Hello, Everyone! I was reading around your forums for a while and now i decided to register, because I need your help.I have to write a motivation letter to apply to an university, but I have never done anything like this before.I'll post my letter below all kinds of advice and suggestions are welcome

As a student in Professional School of Economics and Management “Iordan Zahariev” studying web design,I am very excited and interested in acquiring a bachelor degree in “Web design” in Denmark and more specifically in “Business Academy Aarhus” . With my extensive classroom and life experiences ,I am convinced that I will be a very successful and beneficial student.
With my previous work experience and my exemplary academic performance as a web designer, I would contribute more to your institution than the average student. My education has also provided me with knowledge and experience in key areas of interest such as designing and programming web sites.I have participated in various extracurricular activities that cultivated my interpersonal communication skills ,such as basketball which I have been playing for the last 10 years and has really taught me discipline and team work. In addition, my teachers can attest that I am a team player, as well as an attentive listener who is motivated and dependable.
More importantly, studying in your country would be mutually beneficial. Your country has an excellent reputation for being a place where everyone has an opportunity to pursue their dreams and develop their talents, and I know that the combination of my strong work ethic, commitment, passion for excellence, and motivation to succeed will make me an asset.
I am confident I can distinguish myself from other candidates.Let me describe for you what sets me apart:
- I have demonstrated my teamwork/group/interpersonal skills through extensive group work in my school studies and as a basketball player , contributing as an effective team player ensured the success of each individual and team I have teamed up with.
- As a student, time-management skills are essential, and I’ve also called on my strong organizational skills and detail-orientation to juggle multiple tasks and in a fast-paced environment.
- I have honed exceptional communication skills; both my oral and written communications emphasize detail, accuracy and thoroughness.
- I am really eager to visit new places, meet new people, learn new cultures, but most importantly: receive new knowledge.
Denmark appeals to me because it is an impressive global leader and expertise in many areas. I am particularly interested in continuing my education in your university, because of your country’s reputation for having a highly supportive and team-oriented culture. I am convinced that the combination of my enthusiasm, creativity, and motivation to succeed will make me an asset in any capacity in which you place me.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely