Motivation Letter

Can someone check my grammar and spelling on my motivation letter for university?

Thanks a lot!

Dear Sir/Madame

I apreaciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the International Business Management Studies program at the Hanze University of Applied Sciences for the 2012 autumn term. I want to get a Bachelor Business Administration at this university because it will provide me enough knowladge to star a career as manager in an international recognised corporation, I will also be able to learn at least 2 new languages which are going to be very helpfull. Hanze University of Applied Sciences is situated in the heart of Europe and I will be able to meet and learn how to live in a cultural deversity environment.

I need to get a Bachelor Business Administration so that I can become a marketing, sales, project or senior manager at an international corporation.I have basic knowladge at economics and related to it subjects since I was studying economics and management at high school. I am prepared for more congnititions so that I can become succesfull at my future occupation as manager.

I have been studying for 5 years now at the High School of economics in my hometown. When I entereed this school I havent really thought about my future,but through the years of education I become more responsible and I gained qualities which now appeals to a future manager. As I was growing up i realized that I was in the right field already thats why I want to extend my knowladge and skills with the IBMS program. I think it is the right „next step”that i should take on my way to a succesfull career.

I have spent 5 years at High School of Economics. I have studied economics, marketing, accounting, business communication, statistics and management. I already have basic knowladge at the field that I want to succeed in the near future. As to personal qualities I am – realistic,logical, communicative, ambtitios and determened to make my dreams come true. I have completed 2 internships during the education at high school. I also participated in some programes that simulates setting up new corporation. I have also volunteered at some nonprofit organizations.

In conlusion I would like to say that I am responsible and determined to develop my potential by expanding my theoretical knowladge and excelling my practical skills with the International Business Management Program. Its international aspect and very high standard of education encounters different students from various countries, so the interaction during the study is very enriching and exactly what I am looking for.I am positive that the Hanze University of Applied Sciences is an excellent start for an ambitious business career.