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OlgaTrofimova Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter
Please check my motivation letter
I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to your program in International Business in the 2011 autumn term. I am currently attending high school and anticipate graduating in June of 2011. Since my early years, the question of my future education has been very important to me. I have a great desire to study at your university which will help me to have not only narrow specialization of knowledges, but wider understanding of business environment.
Finland - the European country which open the career prospects and opportunity to continue the education in Europe. Finland situated isn't far from the Russian Federation. It's very important for me to still communicate with my family during my study abroad.
I have a lot of reasons to study abroad. For example, in Russia, we have a lot of students who have received their Bachelor degree but are still unemployed due to the request from employers for applicants to have experience. In the Russian Federation the highest level of corruption and prestige of your education depend of your financial level and not depend of your knowledges.
The most important reason why I am applying to XYZ is because of your education system. I have read and heard that in Finland students are taught less theory and more practice. I found this very useful. An international education creates a diverse learning atmosphere and gives me an advantage over other students whose connections are limited to their native country. My interest in intercultural studies is also determined by the fact that I was born and live in multinational and multicultural country, whose authentic language and culture almost came to extinction.
I have the ambition to obtain masters degree after graduating from the bachelor programme. I think that studying in XYZ will be an excellent platform for my future career. It gives me a lot of opportunities such as working in groups, learning foreign languages, widening my horizons, getting more information about other cultures, and learning in a different way than I am used to.
I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to your program in International Business in the 2011 autumn term. I am currently attending high school and anticipate graduating in June of 2011. Since my early years, the question of my future education has been very important to me. I have a great desire to study at your university which will help me to have not only narrow specialization of knowledges, but wider understanding of business environment.
Finland - the European country which open the career prospects and opportunity to continue the education in Europe. Finland situated isn't far from the Russian Federation. It's very important for me to still communicate with my family during my study abroad.
I have a lot of reasons to study abroad. For example, in Russia, we have a lot of students who have received their Bachelor degree but are still unemployed due to the request from employers for applicants to have experience. In the Russian Federation the highest level of corruption and prestige of your education depend of your financial level and not depend of your knowledges.
The most important reason why I am applying to XYZ is because of your education system. I have read and heard that in Finland students are taught less theory and more practice. I found this very useful. An international education creates a diverse learning atmosphere and gives me an advantage over other students whose connections are limited to their native country. My interest in intercultural studies is also determined by the fact that I was born and live in multinational and multicultural country, whose authentic language and culture almost came to extinction.
I have the ambition to obtain masters degree after graduating from the bachelor programme. I think that studying in XYZ will be an excellent platform for my future career. It gives me a lot of opportunities such as working in groups, learning foreign languages, widening my horizons, getting more information about other cultures, and learning in a different way than I am used to.
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Hi Olga, You've got a good start. You need to organize your letter a bit better. Here's my standard response to those beginning to write their letters.
- Hi Olga, You've got a good start.
- You need to organize your letter a bit better.
- Here's my standard response to those beginning to write their letters.
- Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs.
- Otherwise it is too hard to read.
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Hi Olga,
You've got a good start. You need to organize your letter a bit better.
Here's my standard response to those beginning to write their letters.
Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs. Otherwise it is too hard to read. My guess is that you pasted your letter into the text box. After you pasted your letter, the spaces were removed. To sol
You've got a good start. You need to organize your letter a bit better.
Here's my standard response to those beginning to write their letters.
Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs. Otherwise it is too hard to read. My guess is that you pasted your letter into the text box. After you pasted your letter, the spaces were removed. To sol
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