Motivation letter

Hello I am new here I want to send that motivation letter to the Glion university please grammatic mistakes and also structure of the motivation letter.                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Ziba Valehova

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20.04.2010

Dear Sir/Madam,

I graduated from the school in 2006 and entered Baku Slavic University Translation faculty (Russian English). My exam result was 586 out of 700. In the university I have learned to speak fluently both in the Russian and English languages. Also I have obtained details of my profession. But I do not want to limit my education only with Bachelor degree also with translation profession. My goal is to have master degree abroad. Baku Slavic University does not meet my expectations. In the university I frequently participated in debates among students from various universities. 
I have chosen to apply for Glion University because this is a prestigious university and one of the oldest and most important in Europe. Glion provides an exciting and innovative synergy between academic rigor and global service practice, develops reflective individuals, empowers to meet the challenges of ambitious and wide-ranging career aspirations. Also Glion develops to improve future leaders in technological business and education environment. I am sure that if I study in Glion I can growth my intellectual skills and a habit of life –learning. 
Second I have chosen only Glion because of faculty – tourism. The tourism faculty is one of the required sectors in my country after oil sector. Tourism develops not only in my country but also in the world. If I study in this faculty I can easily find a job both in my country and also in most countries. By studying in the tourism faculty I can aware also understanding of management and organizations. Glion will help me to ahead in my profession, to develop skills at professional level, to solve and manage complex issues creatively, to improve practice both in management and tourism sphere. I shall be able to work with self-direction and originality.
Third I admired of the place that the university surrounded. I have watched a video of the university and I have amazed of the both university and the place.
By studying in Glion I plan to learn German or French languages. “How many languages you know, so many persons you are” supporting this idea I want to enlarge my language field. After learning one of these languages and graduating from Glion I want to study accordance to one of these languages again in Glion.
After graduating Glion I plan to return to my country and to work here. Because if the government assists me to study there if pays all my fees I have to value support of my country and help development of the country, and if every student from my country prefer to stay in foreign countries improvement of various sectors in my country will be impossible. 

Sincerely