Motivation letter

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00I’m writing a motivation letter for Master Degree scholarship. Because this is my first time to write a motivation letter, I already seen few of motivation letter showed in this forum and try to 02br
00create a new one for myself, so please look at my letter and give an advice and correction to it.02br
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00Thanx a lot02br
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00Fanni02br
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00I’m writing to apply for the *** scholarship program.02br
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00In my previous university, I’m only learning basic of IT functionality which hold me for pursue my next career. With this Degree, I will obtain better knowledge and ability of managing and applying Information Technology in larger scale than I got at my previous university and better understanding in IT management and its power. Moreover, learning in Europe gave more experience learning with more conductive and challenging environment, which I can’t have in my original country. Learning in condition where the people have better appreciation for science and have better spirit to growth than my original country would be best experience to have.02br
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00With this Degree and experience, it definitely would be a great gate for stepping my career in higher level and it would be best if I can bring and share my experience living with great people in Europe with my environment in my original country. I hope my develop country can chase and be a partner for European Nation.02br
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00In my high school, I majored in natural science. My most powerful area is math and physics. It is proved when I’m in the first grade I’m joining school math competition team and at my last exam I got best grade at physics score. After finished my high school, I entered a Technical University majored in Information Technology. Although the curriculum at university is wide, I’m focused in Networks and Database Technology. 02br
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00When in University, I’m not only experiencing college, I’m also active member of student faculty organization and had part-time job with my colleagues in software making projects. With this experience, I’m learning how to manage time to deal with my activity and focused to finished prior thing first before others.02br
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00I had my internship opportunity in European Company, *** at IT department. This internship encourages me to have more experience work and socialize in multinational environment. I’m learning how to deal with people who had different culture and learning a different approach to deal with a problem. After finished my college, I had my full-time job experience in Asian Company, YYY as IT Supervisor. This shows me that I need more knowledge about managing IT in larger scale which encourages me to take Master courses in IT management. 02br
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00IT is one of the most powerful sciences in today and tomorrow. IT brings new era of globalization, not just in economy, but also humanity, policy, industry, and many other things. Because I believe information is most influence things in the world. I am logical and scientific person, in this case I prefer to choose information by means of technology than ability of communication to learn. Europe as one of the IT leader in the world is exciting place to learn and experience.02br
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00Thanking you for considering my application and looking forward to your positive reply. 02br
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00Yours Sincerely,0-