motivation letter

Dear All,
this is my second time writing to this forum with same topic. I guess, and this time no one will answer me.
well here it is

Dear Madam or Sir,

Herewith I would like to submit my application fo ***** study scholarship.

In April 2006 I gradutes on biology at the University of "*******". Altough the curriculum was broad, the work on my diploma thesis provoked clear interest in molecular and cell biology with human focus. This work gave me an opportunity to learn and apply basic moelcular biology techniques: PCR based methods, isolation of DNA/RNA and more sophisticated techniques such as cell culture and silencing of RNA. My diploma work was evaluated with the higest grade.

Out of the university curricula I had worked voluntaraly as research assistant on molecular diagnostic project fo detection of ***, which included more than 6.000 swabs and biopsies. This work I had presented on Inernational Medical Scientific Student Congress organized by *******.

I would like to continue my studies in this area and receive MSc and PhD degrees. Hoever, altough our **** society makes efforts to improve the quality of univeristy education, the studies in which I am interested are stil the future to come. Continuing my education in my home country would be nonstimulative and dificult. The lack of sophisticated laboratory instruments will confine any bold ideas. Besides, studenta are found to repeatedly do thesis in the area that already had been explored.

Given my interest and experience in the field of biomolecular science, I am eager to deepen my knowledge and specialize in cell and molecular biology. I find very interesting working on project, which investigation can lead to curring diseases with genetic background. Programs of my choice are preparing these ideas by building up basic knowledgem training the reasoning, educating the aspiratns to resolve scientific problems.

Financing the studies and the living costs should also be envisaged. I finished my graduate studies with financial help of my parents, but my family cannot support my further education. In this sence, **** scholarship will be of invaluable help to broaden my scientific knowledge. Studying in ***** will be an exellent start of fulfilling my dreams to work in research center and become a scientist.

The sponsorship and encouragement of education and sciences are in my opinion the only resonable way into the future. In **** there is a strong will amoung older and younger people to change the society by the example of the western world, but there are still persistent habits from the past, which slow the inevitable transiton process. I am comvinced that the only tranquil way of transition and progress, is to educate the future leaders pf scientific nd political life by practical example. Only quality education could develop our country.

Being convinced that education is future, I am applying for ******* scholarship, in order to be able to continue my studies and pursue a MSc degree. In case you have questions, I would be happy to furnish you with any additional information regarding my certificates (translations) and degree.

Thank you for kindly perusing trough my application. I looki forward to your positive pesponse.

Yours sincerely, *******

Is it too short, should I explain more some of the paragrafs!?!