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Souky Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation Letter

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00 Can someone check my motivation letter? Thank you in advance02br
00 Souky02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00 With this letter I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company, ....... 02br
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00 With the intention of working in a national or international financial institution or a related organization I have completed a Bachelor Es sciences at ...... combining three certificates (Marketing, Business Management, and Finance) and I am currently completing a Graduate Diploma in Finance and Treasury at the University ..... from which I will graduate in may 2006. With the theoretical knowledge I have acquired so far I would like to gain experience by putting my knowledge to practical use00. Since I began studying finance, I have always found this field interesting and stimulating. The corporate and investment banking branch is of particular interest to me; indeed, to follow companies, institutions, even governments and to help them evolve and grow, is an aspect that I find particularly challenging. 00An internship within your Group would enable me to combine my professional interests with my afore mentioned intention of integrating a national or international financial institution.02br
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00 Trough my living in Africa and graduating from a French school as well as the past years studying in Canada I have come to be fluent in English and French. For the same reasons I am entirely capable of integrating and working/studying in a multicultural environment such as your Group. Canadian Universities emphasis a lot on team work; therefore, I had numerous occasions to work on very different scholar projects with, each time, a different team. These experiences taught me to listen to people, to develop my leadership skill, and to take into consideration culture differences. 02br
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00 The Group ....., represents the perfect environment for a young motivated graduate that wishes to enter the banking sector. Your Group embraces values to which I can relate to and in which I can 00further enhance my skills00. The emphasis on people seems to be a core concept within .......; in fact, clients, employees, and shareholders interests and their well-being are very important. The Group's international position represents an opportunity and an experience that I would like to be part of. Nowadays, businesses, institutions, and government have realized that operations take place in a global environment. I have lived in Africa for eighteen years, in Canada for six years, and know western Europe due to the fact that I am part French, getting to know Asia, one of the fastest growing markets, would allow me to further enhance my capability to understand and work in a global economy. 02br
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00 Thank you for your time and consideration and I hope my application will be successful. I am ready to answer any supplementary questions you might have.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00Souky 02br
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1font 00Hi Souky, here is your letter tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful,02font 02br 02br 01font 00- Nick02font 02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam,02br 02br 00I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company. 02br 02br 00I am interested in working in a national or international financial institution or related organization I have completed a Bachelor Es sciences at ......

  • 1font 00Hi Souky, here is your letter tidied up a little.
  • I hope this is helpful,02font 02br 02br 01font 00- Nick02font 02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam,02br 02br 00I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company.
  • 02br 02br 00I am interested in working in a national or international financial institution or related organization I have completed a Bachelor Es sciences at ......
  • combining three certificates (Marketing, Business Management, and Finance) and I am currently completing a Graduate Diploma in Finance and Treasury at the University .....
  • from which I will graduate in May 2006.
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1font00Hi Souky, here is your letter tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful,02font02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company. 02br
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0Thank you very much Nick. I made the corrections and I'm more confident now; I can finally send my letter 05002br
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hey Souky !!Emotion: smile

This is Damien .... iam looking for a nice cover letter as well for applying for an internship ...do u have m

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