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Nimet Posted 21 years ago
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Motivation letter

0Hello, I am looking for one who can crosscheck my motivation letter as soon as possible, because I've leant that deadline is earlier, so S.O.S. ! 05002br
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00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02br
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00 I’ll be graduating from Department of Theology at Uludag University by July 2005. I’ve been studying theology with a variety of social sciences since High School. During my education I dealt not only with theology, but I’ve always tried to use an interdisciplinary method in order to able to combine the relationship between different cultures and different religions. I’ve always tried to be aware what’s going on in the world. It also enriched me by showing the backgrounds of the events. I participated at Erasmus Exchange Programme in Catholic University of Leuven in my last year of undergraduate degree. By that, I aimed at deepening my knowledge about Christianity that is a key to understand the Europe. 02br
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00 I’ve a background on Islam, Christianity and, other major religions exist in the Europe. I’ve taken courses in the fields of different social sciences. By those courses, I gained a general knowledge that helps me to compose different elements and to distinguish cosmopolite structures. The courses I’ve taken here improved my abilities involved, because it was based on a different background. So, I had a chance to learn practically what being European means and what a variety of differences Europe has. 02br
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00 I believe in that within this programme, I will improve my understanding about dealing with the different elements without being unfair none of them. This will be a great step to grasp the similarities and differences Europe and Turkey have. By that, I will have a deep knowledge on the process of acceptance of Turkey. I am sure that by my outside view, the courses will be more international that the programme aims. 02br
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00 Sincerely, 010id5
  

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0 Dear Sir/Madam, 02br 02br 00I’ll be graduating from the Department of Theology at Uludag University by July 2005. I’ve been studying theology with a variety of social sciences since High School. During my education in theology, I always tried to use an interdisciplinary method to allow me to combine the relationships between different cultures and religions.

  • 0 Dear Sir/Madam, 02br 02br 00I’ll be graduating from the Department of Theology at Uludag University by July 2005.
  • I’ve been studying theology with a variety of social sciences since High School.
  • During my education in theology, I always tried to use an interdisciplinary method to allow me to combine the relationships between different cultures and religions.
  • I’ve also always tried to be aware of the actuality in the world.
  • It enriched me by showing the backgrounds of the events.
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0 Dear Sir/Madam, 02br
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00I’ll be graduating from the Department of Theology at Uludag University by July 2005. I’ve been studying theology with a variety of social sciences since High School. During my education in theology, I always tried to use an interdisciplinary method to allow me to combine the relationships between different cultures and religions. I’ve also al
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0 Thanks for your efforts that reached me in a time that I was almost going mad! 02br
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00 Now, I'll print it after the changes you recommend and I'll submit it, 02br
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00 Thanks again, 02br
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00 Take care, 0-
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0Hi Nimet02br
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00glad if I helped but maybe the corrections from a native speaker would be more valuable!!0-
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0 Here's Amandine's version with some minor tweaks:02br
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00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02br
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00 I will be graduating from the Department of Theology at Uludag University in July 2005. I have been studying theology and social sciences since high school. During my education, I have always tried to use interdisciplinary methods, which a

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