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I am writing to apply for entrance to International Erasmus Mundus Scholarship program starting in September 2013. My career ambition is to become an expert researcher in automation.
I graduated school for gifted children “Murager”, majority of subjects were in English. I used to enjoy doing physics and mathematics, I represented my school in country’s mathematic Olympic games for 5 years. As a result, I passed my graduating exam with an expected average score 119 of 125. Since I was child, I have always been interested in the automation and robots. That was the reason of my decision to continue my academic career with the study of “Automation and Control” at Karaganda State Technical University. During my undergraduate years I was fascinated with subjects such as Digital technology, Electronic, Industrial controllers, Mechatronic and Robot technology. I did many projects using computer programs such as Electronic Workbench, Visual Basic, C++ and projects using industrial controllers with program Logo Soft Comfort. I have a firm determination to work hard, as a proof of this words you can see in my transcript that after 4 semester of studying I have earned a grade point average (GPA) 3.88 out of 4. Also, I graduated the general English course in the International House language School with average score 85 percent. During 3 year in university I have taken part in numerous events like Project competitions, workshops and seminars.
I hope that studying my 4th Bachelor year in Europe is a perfect opportunity for me both academically and experientially. The Erasmus Mundus Bachelor program is an optimum course as it will equip me with the right skill sets to step into the exciting domain of Automation. Dream of my life is facilitate human work in industries by introduction new robot technologies. It has grown since I knew how many workers die in industries. Karaganda is industrial city, built to exploit nearby coal mines. According to it, there are many industries where every year miners die. I believe that advanced training in a graduate program of good quality will help me to realize my dream and safe workers lives. I want to make innovative creations to be used by future generations. I would like to get some useful study experience in Europe, because there are perfect educational system, focus on gathering relevant work experience and excellent facilities. This will help me enormously in building my understanding and knowledge towards automation. From hearing Europe educational system, I am confident of my decision. With many distinguished scientist and professors, I know that I will gain expert knowledge at the forefront of discovery. So with this reasons above I am giving to try for myself to be part of the Erasmus Mundus Bachelor program.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your acceptance.
Yours faithfully