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Anton Fedorov Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Motivation essasy
I will take part in entrance examination soon and I will write motivation essay there. I wrote such essay but I suppose it's quite awful, so can you help me to improve it somehow.
During the last two years at school I was thinking about my future education and career. Since I'm interested both in business studies and information technologies thus I want to get solid knowledge in these two areas. In that case BIT degree in Lahti UAS suits me the best.
As for me subjects connected with business is more appropriate for me then IT thus I chose to study last two years in the school where attention was payed to social science and economics. Moreover I helped my father with his small business in accounting. At the same time I'm interested in programming and have experience in making simple programs. Also I spend a lot of time solving mathematical tasks.
I honestly feel that my interests are good background for studying at BIT degree, which could be developed in skills for work and opportunity for later studying.
During the last two years at school I was thinking about my future education and career. Since I'm interested both in business studies and information technologies thus I want to get solid knowledge in these two areas. In that case BIT degree in Lahti UAS suits me the best.
As for me subjects connected with business is more appropriate for me then IT thus I chose to study last two years in the school where attention was payed to social science and economics. Moreover I helped my father with his small business in accounting. At the same time I'm interested in programming and have experience in making simple programs. Also I spend a lot of time solving mathematical tasks.
I honestly feel that my interests are good background for studying at BIT degree, which could be developed in skills for work and opportunity for later studying.
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Read this first, and reconsider what you are saying, and how you are saying it: Your letter has quite a few mistakes. It does not have a very logical organization. The best letters are perfect, with no mistakes.
- Read this first, and reconsider what you are saying, and how you are saying it: Your letter has quite a few mistakes.
- It does not have a very logical organization.
- The best letters are perfect, with no mistakes.
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Read this first, and reconsider what you are saying, and how you are saying it:
Your letter has quite a few mistakes. It does not have a very logical organization.
The best letters are perfect, with no mistakes.
Your letter has quite a few mistakes. It does not have a very logical organization.
The best letters are perfect, with no mistakes.
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