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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Morning test

Please help me correct the paragraph below. Thanks a lot.

Sam always takes the school bus to school. But one day his classmate, Frank, said he would give him a scooter ride. At first, Sam hesitated for a while because he thought riding a scooter was dangerous. However, Frank said he was a great scooter rider and that it would only take five minutes to get to school. Frank insisted on giving him a ride, so Sam took up his offer. However, they got stuck in a traffic jam and couldn’t move. On that day, both Sam and Frank were late for school and missed their morning test.
  

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contiluoFrank said he was a great scooter rider
Consider saying, "highly skilled at riding scooters" instead of "a great scooter rider."

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