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Pawcio Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Success is a long unpredictable road. However, it is one that is worth every slip, every slide, and every fall along the way. Success is acquired by working hard everyday. Success is often a challenging road, filled with my speedbumps and potholes, but a road worth traveling nonetheless. It takes lots of time and nerves to become successful person. Some of the steps we have to take to achieve success are to set goals, Acquire knowledge, and BE self-confidence.

The first step to the success is to set goals. Goals, both short-and long-term, are very important to achieve success. A goal gives us purpose and direction to achieve our ultimate end. Without goals or targets, we wonder aimlessly, where we must accept what life throws at us. Also we have to make sure the goal we are working for is something we really want, not just something that sounds good.

Knowledge is a crucial second step to achieve success. With knowledge, we can make better-informed choices. Knowledge gives us the confidence when we make important decisions. It can be Acquired from reading, studying, and from our life experiences. Everyday our knowledge grows which lead us closer to the success.

The Third step to success is self-confidence. It is the most important step of all. The more self-confident we become, the better we feel about ourselves and in achieving our goal. We must believe in our own abilities and knowledge that we gain. A self-confident person knows what needs to be done, and they act accordingly.

The road to success is long and not always easy. To achieve the success we need to know our goals and be confident about them. We need to know how to achieve the success. Our knowledge would help us accomplish it. Whit all of this steps, we should have no problem to become successful.


i made a little changes.. but i dont know if thats enough.. Emotion: sad if u could help me with 3rd and 4th paragraph.. ad like one more sentence i will really appreciate..
  

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Hi Pawcio, You should keep everything in the same thread. That way, we know what has been written before. I will comment on your 3rd and 4th paragraph, with one minor comment on the second paragraph.

  • Hi Pawcio, You should keep everything in the same thread.
  • That way, we know what has been written before.
  • I will comment on your 3rd and 4th paragraph, with one minor comment on the second paragraph.
  • The first step to the success is to set goals.
  • [1] A goal gives us purpose and direction to achieve our ultimate end.
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Hi Pawcio,

You should keep everything in the same thread. That way, we know what has been written before. I will comment on your 3rd and 4th paragraph, with one minor comment on the second paragraph.




The first step to the success is to set goals. Goals, both short- and long-term, are very important to achieve success.[1] A goal gives us purpose and direction to

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