0
Rona2010 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

More correction please..

Dear All,
please ur correction.. hopefully you can interpret..

Risks faced by small and medium companies in line with product developments and regulations become increasingly complex. Therefore, this study facilitates the small and medium companies to identify risks that will appear before mass production and the risks faced with the supplier relationship in case of changes/product development. The failure in a final product has also been caused by supplier's product, thus critical information about product should be delivered through Supply Chain.
  

Top answer

I hope I have interpreted correctly what you want to say. Here is my revision: The risks faced by small and medium companies in the area of product development and regulation has become increasingly complex. Therefore this study seeks to aid small and medium companies in identifing risks that will appear before mass production begins as well as the risks created by the supplier relationship in the case of developing and changing a product.

  • I hope I have interpreted correctly what you want to say.
  • Here is my revision: The risks faced by small and medium companies in the area of product development and regulation has become increasingly complex.
  • Therefore this study seeks to aid small and medium companies in identifing risks that will appear before mass production begins as well as the risks created by the supplier relationship in the case of developing and changing a product.
  • The failure in a final product is sometimes caused by a supplier's supporting product, thus critical information about that product needs to be delivered across the supply chain.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
I hope I have interpreted correctly what you want to say. Here is my revision:

The risks faced by small and medium companies in the area of product development and regulation has become increasingly complex. Therefore this study seeks to aid small and medium companies in identifing risks that will appear before mass production begins as well as the risks created by the suppli

Related Questions