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Ducks1160 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

More Comma Confusion

Herman looped a string through the fish's gills and put it back into the water, tied to a branch.

Do I need a comma after gills?
Is the comma after water required?

I think I have studied this stuff to a point where it has totally burned my brain out. I would like to write this sentence without any commas.
  

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No you don't need one after gills. Yes you need one after water. Otherwise you'd have "water tied to a branch" which doesn't make sense.

  • No you don't need one after gills.
  • Yes you need one after water.
  • Otherwise you'd have "water tied to a branch" which doesn't make sense.
  • With the comma, it refers back to the fish - even though you never referred to the fish - only its gills.
  • Logic makes you understand that "tied to a branch" is now describing the entire fish.
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No you don't need one after gills.
Yes you need one after water.

Otherwise you'd have "water tied to a branch" which doesn't make sense. With the comma, it refers back to the fish - even though you never referred to the fish - only its gills. Logic makes you understand that "tied to a branch" is now describing the entire fish.

If this is yours, rewrite it. Herman looped a

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