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Kenara Posted 22 years ago

Moonlight

Moonlight they glide across the night with their smiling bride
Moonlight they caress my flesh gently
Moonlight they melt my winter and make me bitter
Moonlight do you have to shine so bright that I lose my sight?

I rest my case because I gave up the chase of all the heavy glaze and deadly gaze
Give me chance to lie down in cold ground and leave my thoughts unbound
Dress me up in soft cotton then slowly push my button and turn me on
On and on and on I know we will eventually flown to where the wind had blown
From the shallow shore where I know I wanted more
To the deep where all the secrets we keep are soaked in weep
I’ve paid my price, gave life a little bit spice and gambling dice
I had my piece but now I want more peace
I had my peace but now I want to seize
My day, my day they lost in endless highway
I speed up, unable to catch up, stranded in silent cup
Moonlight do you have to shine so bright that I lose my sight?

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kenara Give some comments on it, please.... I like the rhymed words in single sentences, but I guess there's a grammatical error in the third line.

  • kenara Give some comments on it, please....
  • I like the rhymed words in single sentences, but I guess there's a grammatical error in the third line.
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kenaraGive some comments on it, please....

I like the rhymed words in single sentences, but I guess there's a grammatical error in the third line.

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