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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Moon Festival
The following paragraph is written by a beginner. Please help me correct it. Thanks !
I had a great Moon festival this year. We had a barbecue at my uncle's house.And my My uncle cooked some chicken, pork and steak to for us. My , and my mom made many delicious snacks for us. The moon was bright and pretty beautiful the at night. After the barbecue, I cut the pomelos to share every one everyone. Some neighbors gave us a box of moon cakes. All of my family liked the Moon Festival this year and had a lot of fun on the day.
I had a great Moon festival this year. We had a barbecue at my uncle's house.
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Hi It's very clear. With very minor changes, I would say.. I had a great Moon festival this year.
- Hi It's very clear.
- With very minor changes, I would say..
- I had a great Moon festival this year.
- We had a barbecue at my uncle's house.
- My uncle cooked some chicken, pork and steak for us.
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It's very clear. With very minor changes, I would say..
I had a great Moon festival this year. We had a barbecue at my uncle's house. My uncle cooked some chicken, pork and steak for us. My mom made many delicious snacks for us. The moon was bright and pretty beautiful that night. After the barbecue, I cut the pomelos to share with everyone. Some neighbors gave us a bo
It's very clear. With very minor changes, I would say..
I had a great Moon festival this year. We had a barbecue at my uncle's house. My uncle cooked some chicken, pork and steak for us. My mom made many delicious snacks for us. The moon was bright and pretty beautiful that night. After the barbecue, I cut the pomelos to share with everyone. Some neighbors gave us a bo
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