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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 11 years ago
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Could you please check the sentence below?
One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino’s highest hill, hoping to hear the cries, that comes from the past, of the most savage killers of all time.
Could you please check the sentence below?
One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino’s highest hill, hoping to hear the cries, that comes from the past, of the most savage killers of all time.
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"Comes" should be "come," but I would actually eliminate "that come" altogether: One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino's highest hill, hoping to the cries from the past of the most savage killers of all time. " I would find a better way to express that.
- "Comes" should be "come," but I would actually eliminate "that come" altogether: One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino's highest hill, hoping to the cries from the past of the most savage killers of all time.
- " I would find a better way to express that.
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"Comes" should be "come," but I would actually eliminate "that come" altogether:
One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino's highest hill, hoping to the cries from the past of the most savage killers of all time.
I'm not very fond of "go see." I would find a better way to express that.
One day I want to go see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino's highest hill, hoping to the cries from the past of the most savage killers of all time.
I'm not very fond of "go see." I would find a better way to express that.
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One day I'd like to go and see Fortress Guaita on Mount Titan, San Marino’s highest hill, hoping to hear cries from the past of the most savage killers of all time.
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