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Spamyboy Posted 17 years ago
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Monologue about electronic communications
Hello everyone,
I had to write a monoloogue for a English class. Topic is electronic communications. What do you think? What should I change? Thanks in advance for your opinion.
Monologue:
I am going to speak about electronic communications.
Day after day technologies are being developed and demand of information is rising. Such phenomenon has formatted conductive circumstances to expand e-communication technologies. A rapid life as it is now – would not be comprehensible without email, mobile phone or other devices promoting productive interchange of information. Precisely because of mounting demand of knowledge, e-communication technologies market is irrepressibly getting popular.
As an example of such progressive popularity could become any of us. I personally write emails to friends all over the world every day; I pay my bills over the internet; I make money online – because of today's technologies, everything mentioned ten or so years ago would have taken a week and now we can do it in over a couple of minutes. Thanks to e-communication tools, such as discussion forums and chatting rooms – this monologue was emended by a numerous native speakers, leading to the conclusion that we do need to collaborate by communicating to succeed.
However, sudden e-communication tools resettling into our society could not have gone by without any negative results. A new social set of people has created, that because of various reasons are more prone to communicate virtually, then face-to-face. Psychologists name couple of reasons to explain this appearance: fist, it is possibility to express anonymously your opinion; then it is naive thoughtless believe of virtual future and hope of creating new life to, possibly, compensate current. Projects as second life improves these affirmations very well. After all, isn’t there any truth?
I had to write a monoloogue for a English class. Topic is electronic communications. What do you think? What should I change? Thanks in advance for your opinion.
Monologue:
I am going to speak about electronic communications.
Day after day technologies are being developed and demand of information is rising. Such phenomenon has formatted conductive circumstances to expand e-communication technologies. A rapid life as it is now – would not be comprehensible without email, mobile phone or other devices promoting productive interchange of information. Precisely because of mounting demand of knowledge, e-communication technologies market is irrepressibly getting popular.
As an example of such progressive popularity could become any of us. I personally write emails to friends all over the world every day; I pay my bills over the internet; I make money online – because of today's technologies, everything mentioned ten or so years ago would have taken a week and now we can do it in over a couple of minutes. Thanks to e-communication tools, such as discussion forums and chatting rooms – this monologue was emended by a numerous native speakers, leading to the conclusion that we do need to collaborate by communicating to succeed.
However, sudden e-communication tools resettling into our society could not have gone by without any negative results. A new social set of people has created, that because of various reasons are more prone to communicate virtually, then face-to-face. Psychologists name couple of reasons to explain this appearance: fist, it is possibility to express anonymously your opinion; then it is naive thoughtless believe of virtual future and hope of creating new life to, possibly, compensate current. Projects as second life improves these affirmations very well. After all, isn’t there any truth?
Top answer
there were a few grammar mistakes. The underlined sentence must be rephrased. I could not understand it.
- there were a few grammar mistakes.
- The underlined sentence must be rephrased.
- I could not understand it.
- Monologue: I am going to speak about electronic communications.
- Day after day technologies are being developed and the demand for information is rising.
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Here it is..there were a few grammar mistakes. The underlined sentence must be rephrased. I could not understand it.
Monologue:
I am going to speak about electronic communications.
Day after day technologies are being developed and the demand for information is rising. Such phenomenon has formatted conductive circumstances to expand e-communication technologies. A rapid l
Monologue:
I am going to speak about electronic communications.
Day after day technologies are being developed and the demand for information is rising. Such phenomenon has formatted conductive circumstances to expand e-communication technologies. A rapid l
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