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Essay & Composition Writing

Money to live, or live to money?

0 00I appreciate if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.00I felt the time really changed when I watch a TV program about the salary of various occupations. Today, peoples care a lot about money because food/gas prices are risen up but salaries are stay the same or lowered.00Even for the children’s show that introduces various jobs mentioning the average salary of today’s occupation at the end of the program, which had been considered rude and improper when I was a child. 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 00Collapse of the communism brought us kind of an idea ”pursuing money is justice”, I can not totally agree with the idea when listing the news of suffering people because of the risen food price and the speculation made the price crazy. . 00 00 00I am not a communist, and also value the importance of the money since I am living this era.00However, I believe money is not the most important, but just a method to pay our daily bills and helps our dream come true, not the dream itself.00Flour and butter prices are risen up, bad news for the sweet teeth like me.02br
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I felt the 01u 00time really02u 00 changed when I 01u 00watch02u 00 a TV program about the salary of various occupations. 02u 00Even for 01u 00the02u 00 children’s show that introduces various j01u 00obs mentioning02u 00 the average salary of today’s 01u 00occupation02u 00 at the end of the program, which 01u 00had been02u 00 considered rude and improper when I was a child. 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 01u 00 00Collapse of the02u 00 communism brought us01u 00 kind of an02u 00 01u 00idea ”pursuin02u 00g money is01u 00 justice02u 00”, I 01u 00can not 02u 00totally agree with the idea when 01u 00listing02u 00 the news of suffering people because of the 01u 00risen02u 00 food 01u 00price02u 00 and the speculation01u 00 made02u 00 the price 01u 00crazy02u 00.

— Mister Micawber

  • I felt the 01u 00time really02u 00 changed when I 01u 00watch02u 00 a TV program about the salary of various occupations.
  • 02u 00Even for 01u 00the02u 00 children’s show that introduces various j01u 00obs mentioning02u 00 the average salary of today’s 01u 00occupation02u 00 at the end of the program, which 01u 00had been02u 00 considered rude and improper when I was a child.
  • 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 01u 00 00Collapse of the02u 00 communism brought us01u 00 kind of an02u 00 01u 00idea ”pursuin02u 00g money is01u 00 justice02u 00”, I 01u 00can not 02u 00totally agree with the idea when 01u 00listing02u 00 the news of suffering people because of the 01u 00risen02u 00 food 01u 00price02u 00 and the speculation01u 00 made02u 00 the price 01u 00crazy02u 00.
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