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Whoosh_bang83 Posted 17 years ago
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Module 9 help!

Hi everyone. I'm stuck on module 9 task 2! (Describing a person's physical appearance). Heres the feedback i got from my tutor.

Here are my target language and assumed knowledge that my tutor says are wrong

Target Language.
He is overweight.
He has big blue eyes.
He's wearing new blue jumper and red trousers.
He has brown hair.
She is wearing new shoes.
Beth is short and thin. She has long blonde hair with blue eyes.
She is wearing a red dress with new shoes.
Tall
Thin
Small
Arms
Legs
Feet
Hands
Mouth
Nose
Eyes

Assumed Knowledge.
Students at this level will know almost nothing when it comes to describing someones physical appearance.
Being elementary level they will only know very basic english words.

and my feedback.....

SORRY, BUT I'M AFRAID YOU HAVE STILL NOT TAKEN MY FEEDBACK INTO
CONSIDERATION WHEN MAKING YOUR CHANGES.

THE ASSUMED KNOWLEDGE IS GIVEN AS:
Parts of the body, colours and clothing
SO NONE OF THESE WORDS CAN BE IN THE TARGET LANGUAGE.

AS I MENTIONED PREVIOUSLY, THE TARGET LANGUAGE
SHOULD MAINLY BE DESCRIPTIVE ADJECTIVES (SUCH AS TALL, THIN,
BEAUTIFUL) PLUS HOW TO PUT TOGETHER THE LANGUAGE SO YOUR STUDENTS
KNOW HOW TO MAKE A FULL DESCRIPTION THUS:
JOHN IS TALL AND THIN. HE HAS SHORT BLACK HAIR AND GREEN EYES.
HE'S WEARING A RED T-SHIRT, BLUE JEANS AND TRAINERS.

Now i'm confused as to what to change for my target language and assumed knowledge.

Any ideas guys?

Many thanks

Kieron
  

Top answer

Hi Kieron, Have you passed yet? I am having similar struggles but a different option. Papa J

  • Hi Kieron, Have you passed yet?
  • I am having similar struggles but a different option.
  • Papa J
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Hi Kieron,

Have you passed yet? I am having similar struggles but a different option.

Papa J
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Hi papa J,

Have you passed yet as i am stuck on task 2.

Cheers,

Bill
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hi im also stuck on module 9 task 2 i have decided to do the same as you but i have no idea where to start?? If you can give me any ideas it would be great thanks.

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