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Sesquipedalian101 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Modify

Dear teachers,

I have a question concerning the following sentence:

1. In view of the short time that we have with the students, and their interests and concerns, I suggest that....

Is there a need to change it to the following so that the phrase (="their interests and concerns") in the second part of the sentence will make sense:

2. In view of the short time that we have with the students, and in consiseration of their interests and concerns, I suggest that....

Thank you very much for your help.

  

Top answer

Both fragments are possible. " What is the rest of the sentence?

  • Both fragments are possible.
  • " What is the rest of the sentence?
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Both fragments are possible. I would remove the comma after "students."

What is the rest of the sentence?

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Apologies... there is a typographical error: it is "consideration".

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