Modifier Question

My English teacher told me to change this sentence so that the clause modifies news: "From unbiased and fair news, to entertainment news, to news that is strictly based on opinions , we have to be careful to filter each and every piece of news we hear, read or see on television". I changed it to this: "Whether it is unbiased and fair, based strictly on opinion, or is simply pertaining to the entertainment world, we have to be careful to filter each and every piece of news we hear, read or see on television for accuracy". Did I do what she asked? If not, how can I improve it?