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Hrsanei Posted 15 years ago
Vocabulary

Modification

Hi.

Someone asked me to proofread the followins sentence.

Sector plates have a combinational benefits of light weight and high capacity of load tolerance.

and I fixed it as follows:

Sector plates benefit from light weight combined with high capacity of load tolerance.

But I don't know if my modification was a change for better or worse

I would be grateful if you could think of other ways of writing the sentence.

thanks
  

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Suggestion: Sector plates have combinational benefits deriving from its light weight and its tolerance of high load capacity.

— Darkmax

  • Suggestion: Sector plates have combinational benefits deriving from its light weight and its tolerance of high load capacity.
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Suggestion:

Sector plates have combinational benefits deriving from its light weight and its tolerance of high load capacity.
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Hi,

Are you sure about that?
darkmaxSector plates have combinational benefits deriving from its light weight and its tolerance of high load capacity.
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Well, seems like I made a small error in that. Let me correct that.

Sector plates have combinational benefits deriving from their light weight and capacity for high load tolerance.
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hi.Thanks for your response, but you made two sentences that structurally are different.
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Hi,

Someone asked me to proofread the followins sentence.

Sector plates have a combinational benefits of light weight and high capacity of load tolerance.

and I fixed it as follows:

Sector plates benefit from light weight combined with high capacity of load tolerance.

But I don't k
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The technical meaning of the sector plates seemed lost or understated.
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My sentences are structurally different but their meaning remains. Perhaps it is too technical.
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