Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology.

It is true that new technologies have had popularly in companies. In my opinion, technology has affected work in various ways. I also believe that it exists more drawbacks when people depend too much on technology.

Most of all growth technologies impact on technique we work are technology of computer. Firstly, employees are able to gain knowledge from websites, database by exchange them with other colleagues in different countries. Secondly, people use the internet for placing orders by email thus saving time and petrol on trips to supplier. Perhaps, vendors in other nations where are limited about transport. Moreover, modern machines have replaced human labour in many industries, so employers will reduce a part of expenses simultaneously increase their profit.

Although modern technologies change the way work of human, but there are some disadvantages. many companies, banks in order to saving space storage, they will save data into computer. Unfortunately, a computer hacker might access to a bank information system and take person's credit card number. In another cases, the hacker might steal the most important data. Of course, they will withdraw whole money in account or transfer to their account. Besides, video conferencing has enable people to exchange ideas without travelling across the world. As a result, people less interaction in real world.

In conclusion, revolutionised technology is affect to the way of work with more aspects. However, we need to discourage to rely too much on technology.

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