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mobile phones
Can I have your feedback about the following sentences?
The matter of permitting mobile phones in the classroom is not about the curve of grades but about how to control oneself. People who insist on banning the use of students' cell phones insist that cell phones distract students.
The matter of permitting mobile phones in the classroom is not about the curve of grades but about how to control oneself. People who insist on banning the use of students' cell phones insist that cell phones distract students.
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It can be improved. The problem of mobile phones in the classroom is not about the grade curve but about controlling oneself. Those who call for banning their use insist that cell phones are distracting.
- It can be improved.
- The problem of mobile phones in the classroom is not about the grade curve but about controlling oneself.
- Those who call for banning their use insist that cell phones are distracting.
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It can be improved.
The problem of mobile phones in the classroom is not about the grade curve but about controlling oneself. Those who call for banning their use insist that cell phones are distracting.
The problem of mobile phones in the classroom is not about the grade curve but about controlling oneself. Those who call for banning their use insist that cell phones are distracting.
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