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Can someone please proof this for grammar or punctuation errors.... im sure there are some...thanks a whole lot!!!
Could the Holocaust have been prevented?
Outline
Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties, is a disaster that could have been avoided had valid
information been recognized or had the uprising of a tyrannous ruler with a dangerous
past come to a halt before reaching massive havoc.
I. Many argue that an event like the Holocaust was bound to happen following the chaos
and the desire for change that World War II brought with it.
A. Adolf Hitler’s childhood obsession with battles and the German nation, despite
his Austrian decent, later became the foundation for his fantasy of having a
dominant Aryan race (Wikipedia).
1. With the leader of one of the most powerful nations at the time possessing such an
extensive history of thoughts of war and mischief, it is possible that the Holocaust
was inevitable.
2. However, if such a deduction were made, then it would be only reasonable to
assume that every young delinquent of the current generation will develop into a
mass murderer as well.
B. The death of Hitler’s mother created a vengeful fire within him and one doctor said
that “in all [his] career, [he] had never seen anyone so prostrate with grief as Adolf
Hitler” (Dr. Bloch).
Could the Holocaust have been prevented?
Outline
Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties, is a disaster that could have been avoided had valid
information been recognized or had the uprising of a tyrannous ruler with a dangerous
past come to a halt before reaching massive havoc.
I. Many argue that an event like the Holocaust was bound to happen following the chaos
and the desire for change that World War II brought with it.
A. Adolf Hitler’s childhood obsession with battles and the German nation, despite
his Austrian decent, later became the foundation for his fantasy of having a
dominant Aryan race (Wikipedia).
1. With the leader of one of the most powerful nations at the time possessing such an
extensive history of thoughts of war and mischief, it is possible that the Holocaust
was inevitable.
2. However, if such a deduction were made, then it would be only reasonable to
assume that every young delinquent of the current generation will develop into a
mass murderer as well.
B. The death of Hitler’s mother created a vengeful fire within him and one doctor said
that “in all [his] career, [he] had never seen anyone so prostrate with grief as Adolf
Hitler” (Dr. Bloch).
Top answer
Hi, I've high-lighted some areas you need to look at and correct. Best wishes, Clive Could the Holocaust have been prevented? Outline Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties I believe you mean 'tragedies' , is a disaster that could have been avoided had valid information been recognized or had the uprising of a tyrannous ruler with a dangerous past come to a halt before reaching massive havoc.
- Hi, I've high-lighted some areas you need to look at and correct.
- Best wishes, Clive Could the Holocaust have been prevented?
- Outline Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties I believe you mean 'tragedies' , is a disaster that could have been avoided had valid information been recognized or had the uprising of a tyrannous ruler with a dangerous past come to a halt before reaching massive havoc.
- I.
- Many argue that an event like the Holocaust was bound to happen following the chaos and the desire for change that World War II brought with it .
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Hi,
I've high-lighted some areas you need to look at and correct.
Best wishes, Clive
Could the Holocaust have been prevented?
Outline
Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties I believe you mean 'tragedies'
I've high-lighted some areas you need to look at and correct.
Best wishes, Clive
Could the Holocaust have been prevented?
Outline
Thesis: The Holocaust, like most travesties I believe you mean 'tragedies'
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I want to know if the word western should be written here with the capital leeter or not.here is the sentence:
I looked at the western sky.
and here is another question;should i put comma before as in this sentence?
here is the sentence;
Mother shouted as she left the room.
thanks
Anna
I looked at the western sky.
and here is another question;should i put comma before as in this sentence?
here is the sentence;
Mother shouted as she left the room.
thanks
Anna
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Hi,
I want to know if the word western should be written here with the capital leeter or not.here is the sentence:
I looked at the western sky. You dpn't need a capital.
and here is another question;should i put comma before as in this sentence?
here is t
I want to know if the word western should be written here with the capital leeter or not.here is the sentence:
I looked at the western sky. You dpn't need a capital.
and here is another question;should i put comma before as in this sentence?
here is t
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