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Silak12 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Mistakes in this para?

Hi! everyone.
Could someone point out the mistakes I have made in the para below?
It’s necessary that children start being made aware of these limits right from the beginning of their formative years so that they can tell apart good from evil and which/this(which one is correct here?) is the ability that distinguishes us from animals.
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It is too cluttered as a single sentence. Children should be made aware of these limits right from the beginning of their formative years so that they can tell good from evil. This is the ability that distinguishes us from animals.

  • It is too cluttered as a single sentence.
  • Children should be made aware of these limits right from the beginning of their formative years so that they can tell good from evil.
  • This is the ability that distinguishes us from animals.
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It is too cluttered as a single sentence.

Children should be made aware of these limits right from the beginning of their formative years so that they can tell good from evil. This is the ability that distinguishes us from animals.

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