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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Should I write behaving nicely, delivering some bread, or that way it's okay?

The German military moved into the city and behaved nicely, delivered some bread and food.

  

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"Nicely" is imprecise at best, and it actually sounds quite unlikely. I would change "delivered" to "delivering". Bread is food.

— Anonymous

  • "Nicely" is imprecise at best, and it actually sounds quite unlikely.
  • I would change "delivered" to "delivering".
  • Bread is food.
  • "
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"Nicely" is imprecise at best, and it actually sounds quite unlikely. I would change "delivered" to "delivering". Bread is food.

"The German military moved into the city and behaved humanely, delivering some bread and other foodstuffs."

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