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Lu14 Posted 10 years ago
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We are going to boarding in Ljubljana at 2 pm. Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking. If everything be okey, we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am. Then we are going to check in our hotel Ming Wah International Convention Centre. First sight that we are going to see is Man Mo Temple. In Tim Ho Wan lunch is going to wait for us. Delicious food is served there. After the lunch we are going to to see Clock Tower and then we are going to Tshim Sha Tsui Promenade. There you will have a choise where you go. You can visit Space Museum or Cultural Centre. Around 7 pm are we going to have dinner at our hotel. After a long day, we all will need to sleep well for next day, for new adventures.
The second day we are going to start with breakfast at our wonderful hotel. Next step of our journey is in ocean park hong kong. This water park offer you a great opportunity for having fun. New day, new location for lunch. That day we are going to having lunch at Megan's Kitchen. After lunch we are going to to climb the hill wher the home of Big Buddha is. Around 5 o'clock is planned to visit Temple Street Night Market. Following is the dinner at our hotel and then sleeping.
Our third day will be started also in our hotel with breakfast. Immediately after breakfast, we are going to Hong Kong Disneyland. Because we are going to be there most of the day, a lunch is included. We are going to se also Wong Tai Sin Temple and after that we are going to have a dinner at Aqua Spirit. On the way back to the hotel we are going to see even Lan Kwai Fong.
  

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We are going to boarding will board the flight in Ljubljana at 2 p m, Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking. If everything be okey, and we will should arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am local time . After clearing immigration and customs at the airport, we should find our guide waiting for us in the arrivals hall.

  • We are going to boarding will board the flight in Ljubljana at 2 p m, Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking.
  • If everything be okey, and we will should arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am local time .
  • After clearing immigration and customs at the airport, we should find our guide waiting for us in the arrivals hall.
  • Then we are going to check in go to our hote l - the Ming Wah International Convention Centre.
  • The f irst sight that we are going to see is Man Mo Temple.
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We are going to boarding will board the flight in Ljubljana at 2 pm, Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking. If everything be okey, and we will should arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am local time. After clearing immigration and customs at the airport, we should find our guide waiting for us in the arrivals hall.
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