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D_say Posted 16 years ago
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Please make correction if there is any mistake in the paras

best regards

This is to certify that Mr. ABC has worked in our organization as “Assistant Brand Manager” with effect from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005. During this tenure, we found him a very energetic and an intelligent brand custodian equipped with diverse set of skills. His passion has been to deliver excellence while striving to set new trends in the marketplace. He has the ability to keep the brand as top of voice which gave a tremendous growth.

He also worked side by side with the sales team to ensure that his plans were executed properly. He has nominated as an Internal Auditor for ISO 9001:2000. He has been an asset for our organization and left us on his own accord.

  

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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage, which you should delete: This is to certify that Mr. ABC has worked in our organization as "A ssistant Brand Manage r" with effect from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005. During this tenure, we found him a very energetic and an intelligent brand custodian equipped w ith div erse set of skills.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage, which you should delete: This is to certify that Mr.
  • ABC has worked in our organization as "A ssistant Brand Manage r" with effect from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005.
  • During this tenure, we found him a very energetic and an intelligent brand custodian equipped w ith div erse set of skills.
  • His passion has been to deliver excellence while striving to set new trends in the marketplace.
  • He has the ability to keep the brand as top of voice which gave a tremendous growth.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage, which you should delete:

This is to certify that Mr. ABC has worked in our organization as "Assistant Brand Manager" with effect from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005. During this tenure, we found him a very energetic and an intelligent brand custodian equipped with di
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Sir, Thank you for your time. I have made some changes but I am sorry for bothering you again if you kindly could review it.
best regards

This is to certify that Mr. ABC in our organization as Assistant Brand Manager from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005. We found him a very energetic and an intelligent brand custodian equipped with set of skills. His passion has been to deliver ex
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This is to certify that Mr. ABC worked in our organization as Assistant Brand Manager from May 2, 2003 to August 31, 2005. We found him a very energetic and intelligent brand custodian equipped with a diverse set of skills. His passion has been to deliver excellence while striving to set new trends in the marketplace. He has the ability to create a tremendous growth in custom
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Excellent Mister Micawber

Thank you so much Sir.
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