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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Mission impossible

Please check the following paragraph.

This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that, too. My brother works in a car-washing station. He always sees many rich person driving their valuable,rare, and luxurious cars to get washed. Every time he sees the high-end cars, he will always brag he wants to buy one. However, he is too lazy to earn more money. Therefore, to be a rich person is a mission impossible for him. I wish someday he would realize working hard is the only way to make his dream come true.
  

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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that, too. My brother works in a car-washing station .

  • This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio.
  • Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that, too.
  • My brother works in a car-washing station .
  • He always sees many rich person driving their valuable,rare, and luxurious cars to get washed.
  • Every time he sees the high-end cars, he will always brag he wants to buy one.
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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that, too. My brother works in a car-washing station. He always sees many rich person driving their valuable,rare, and luxurious cars to get washed. Every time he sees the high-end cars, he will always brag he wants to buy one. However, he is too lazy to earn more mon
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1. washing-car station
2. many rich persons
3. luxurious cars
4. he always brags
5. an impossible mission
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Please repost your revised text: I need to see the context.
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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that, too. My brother works in a car-washer station. He always sees many rich persons driving their valuable cars to get washed. Every time he sees the high-end cars, he always brags he wants to buy one. However, he is too lazy to earn more money. Therefore, to be a r
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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. Many people say that Scorpio is very jealous, and I agree with that. My brother works in a car wash. He always sees rich people bringing their expensive cars to get washed. Every time he sees the high-end cars, he always brags that he wants to buy one. However, he is too lazy to earn more money. Therefore, to be a rich per

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