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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Mighty ocean

Please check the following paragraph.

I love my trip to Hualien. Firstly, it was a wonderful memory to me in Hualien. I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation. Second, it is a beautiful place to go. There are sublime mountain scenery and mighty ocean. Third, it is a beautiful county that different from here in Taoyuan. You can get another feelings there. If I have time, I will go to Hualien again. Especially, Taroko National Park.
  

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Hi I love d my trip to Hualien. Firstly, it was a wonderful memory to me in Hualien . I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation.

— Prajwalkr

  • Hi I love d my trip to Hualien.
  • Firstly, it was a wonderful memory to me in Hualien .
  • I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation.
  • Second ly , it is a beautiful place to visit(better) .
  • There are sublime mountain scener ies and mighty ocean s .
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I loved my trip to Hualien. Firstly, it was a wonderful memory to me in Hualien. I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation. Secondly, it is a beautiful place to visit(better). There are
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I loved my trip to Hualien. Firstly, I have wonderful memories of Hualien. I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation. Secondly, it is a beautiful place to visit. There are sublime
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