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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please help me to correcting this short messages?
Dear Sue,
Big thanks to sue and her team. It was an incredible week of fun and learning from both of us. A few people involved in this program did a fantastic job teaching " one to One discipleship ". Everything I was learning from this lesson and encouraging me to do for young people and also really touched my heart testimony from everyone.
I hope that God is moving in my life and i will see GOD miracle. Thanks again for your support ,time and enthusiastic. it has been inspirational for me and had a great chance to see all of you this year.
I am already looking forward to the next year!
Thank you very much indeed.
Could you please help me to correcting this short messages?
Dear Sue,
Big thanks to sue and her team. It was an incredible week of fun and learning from both of us. A few people involved in this program did a fantastic job teaching " one to One discipleship ". Everything I was learning from this lesson and encouraging me to do for young people and also really touched my heart testimony from everyone.
I hope that God is moving in my life and i will see GOD miracle. Thanks again for your support ,time and enthusiastic. it has been inspirational for me and had a great chance to see all of you this year.
I am already looking forward to the next year!
Thank you very much indeed.
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I think this is what you intend: Dear Sue, A big thank-you to you and your team ! It was an incredible week of fun and learning for both of us. The people involved in this program did a fantastic job of teaching " One-to-One Dis cipleship".
- I think this is what you intend: Dear Sue, A big thank-you to you and your team !
- It was an incredible week of fun and learning for both of us.
- The people involved in this program did a fantastic job of teaching " One-to-One Dis cipleship".
- Everything I learned from this lesson encourages me to help young people , and everyone's testimony also really touched my heart.
- I hope that *** is moving in my life and that I will see His miracles .
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I think this is what you intend:
Dear Sue,
A big thank-you to you and your team!
It was an incredible week of fun and learning for both of us. The people involved in this program did a fantastic job of teaching "One-to-One Discipleship". Everything I learned from this lesson encourages me to
Dear Sue,
A big thank-you to you and your team!
It was an incredible week of fun and learning for both of us. The people involved in this program did a fantastic job of teaching "One-to-One Discipleship". Everything I learned from this lesson encourages me to
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