Message to.friend
Could someone help me to correcr this message ?
Hi Jane
How are you ?
I miss you so much , I am always want to text you and asking about you , but I am so busy and I don't have alot of time.
I am going to travel next week , I am going to go to Canda.
As I told you , I always want to go there , and finally I will .
I will go with my brother, his name is Jack, he is yonger than me , but he looks bigger.
I have been saving my money for two years.
At the begining my father not allowed for us to go ; because he didn't want us to go alone , and he can't come with us becauae of his working , but after my mother had persuaded him , he accepted.
I have to go now , I have to prepare my bag and buy some things .
So i will talk to you later .
Bye.
Top answer
You have some problems with your grammar I suppose. You shouldn't put BE in a sentence which already has a verb. I always want to text you and ask you about yourself.
- You have some problems with your grammar I suppose.
- You shouldn't put BE in a sentence which already has a verb.
- I always want to text you and ask you about yourself.
- his name is jack, he is younger than me.
- at the beginning, my father did not allow us to go because he didn't want us to go on our own and he can't go with us because of his work.
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You have some problems with your grammar I suppose. You shouldn't put BE in a sentence which already has a verb.
I always want to text you and ask you about yourself.
his name is jack, he is younger than me.
at the beginning, my father did not allow us to go because he didn't want us to go on our own and he can't go with us because of his work.
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