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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Mercury contamination
Hello, I have a question about a sentence that I am to correct, but seem to have a difficulty getting it right. My sentence still doesn't sound right and I' worried about straying too far from the original meaning. So here goes...
Original sentence: World’s significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in...
My sentence: Some of the world’s most mercury contaminated places can be found in the...
Thank you very much for any advice!
Original sentence: World’s significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in...
My sentence: Some of the world’s most mercury contaminated places can be found in the...
Thank you very much for any advice!
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Anonymous Original sentence: World’s most significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in... It sounds perfectly right to me.
- Anonymous Original sentence: World’s most significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in...
- It sounds perfectly right to me.
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AnonymousOriginal sentence: World’s most significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in...It sounds perfectly right to me.
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Original sentence: World’s significant places contaminated with toxic mercury can be found in...
My sentence: Some of the world’s most mercury contaminated places can be found in the...
The world’s most mercury-contaminated places can be found in ...
The original does not indicate only 'some'.
My sentence: Some of the world’s most mercury contaminated places can be found in the...
The world’s most mercury-contaminated places can be found in ...
The original does not indicate only 'some'.
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