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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Memorable memories

- Last night my fiancee and I strolled along the beach and the air was way so comfortable. This morning we got up very early to go out watch a sunrise. Afterwards we returned to the hotel to check out and drove straight home. Our trip was not very long but it left lots of memorable memories to us.

- Are these sentences ok in written English?

Thanks so much to Teachers,

Namsteven
  

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Hi, Last night my fiancee and I strolled along the beach and the air was so fresh/crisp. This morning we got up very early to watch/enjoy the sunrise. After that we returned to the/our hotel to check out and then drove straight home.

— Ivanhr

  • Hi, Last night my fiancee and I strolled along the beach and the air was so fresh/crisp.
  • This morning we got up very early to watch/enjoy the sunrise.
  • After that we returned to the/our hotel to check out and then drove straight home.
  • Our trip was not very long but it has left us with lots of memorable memories.
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Hi,

Last night my fiancee and I strolled along the beach and the air was so fresh/crisp. This morning we got up very early to watch/enjoy the sunrise. After that we returned to the/our hotel to check out and then drove straight home. Our trip was not very long but it has left us with lots of memorable memories.
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namsteven- it left lots of memorable memories to us.

This is redundant. Try "lots of lasting memories."
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