In today’s increasingly digitalized world, because of the advent of technology, people depend on it for entertainment. Given that this trend will lead to technological overdependence, I completely argue that it brings more detrimental effects to people in different aspects.
Firstly, in human private life, technological overdependence has an impact on the quality of work and social relationships. Nowadays, employees require their employers to work more productively, therefore, workers have more and more pressure and they may find technological devices as entertaining tools. In the case of overdependence, their work will be affected and its quality can decrease dramatically. Furthermore, owing to digital technology development, communicating through social media platforms becomes more and more common. Hence, people can easily expose to it, create inactivity, lazy to socialize and make new friends. Lack of face-to-face communication may lead to feeling distant from different relationships.
Secondly, in human health problems, depending more on technology for recreation may result in decreasing mental and physical health. In today’s increasingly digitalized world, people’s exposure to technological devices become easy and prevalent, such as working from home therefore time spent on them increases significantly. People’s health can be affected when they depend on technology and they can suffer from eyestrain, obesity, and chronic diseases. Besides, people not only face physical health but also mental health. In social networks, there is a lot of negative and positive content, as a result people who are being exposed to bad news or negative online interactions, may lead to a higher level of depression or anxiety.
In conclusion, overdependence on technology has detrimental effects on human lifestyle and health problems. I believe that this trend will be changed when people’s awareness has risen.
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