It was very nice meeting you in the hallway today. I've attached my resume to this email and was wondering if could forward it to your supervisor. Thank you so much for telling me that you guys are hiring and I look forward to maybe working with you in the future. Have a nice day.
Please proofread. Thank you.
Top answer
In the 3rd sentence, you need a comma between hiring and and.
— Philip
In the 3rd sentence, you need a comma between hiring and and.
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