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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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In a town where your hopes and dreams are made into reality, I have finally found the one thing that's allowed me to step out of my own shadow... They say when a person is contented he becomes boring yet the one thing that's enliven me has made me embrace this complacency... Whoever is up in the universe has given me chances and many opportunities in life that I have overlooked without a second thought... I am grateful for everything that's come my way, good and bad, but I know now is the time to elevate myself because the window of life is soon to shut...
  

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Powder1 Is this a well written paragraph?
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Can someone please proofread it for me? I accidentally posted as anon. Thank you!
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Anonymousyet the one thing that's enliven me has made me embrace this complacency
AnonymousWhoever is up in the universe
Anonymousthe window of life is soon to shut
Try to rephrase the above; the meaning is unclear.
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teechr Anonymousyet the one thing that's enliven me has made me embrace this complacencyAnonymousWhoever is up in the universeAnonymousthe window of life is soon to shutTry to rephrase the above; the meaning is unclear.
In a town where your hopes and dreams are made into reality, I have finally found the one reason that's allowed me to step out of my ow
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In a town where your hopes and dreams are made into can become a reality, I have finally found the one reason thing that's allowed me to step out of my own shadow.

They say when a person is contented, he/she becomes boring; yet, the essence of the very same love which is that enlivens me ha

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