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D_say Posted 16 years ago
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³ Coordinated with Electronic and Press Media for Press Release to publish/air on their mediums.
many thanks n best regards
D_Say
Hope you all will be okay. I need your assistance to make sure the sentence below is correct.
³ Coordinated with Electronic and Press Media for Press Release to publish/air on their mediums.
many thanks n best regards
D_Say
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Is this text designed to appear as a note on press releases? The English is not exactly right, but I also don't really understand what it's trying to say. What do you mean by "coordinated with"?
- Is this text designed to appear as a note on press releases?
- The English is not exactly right, but I also don't really understand what it's trying to say.
- What do you mean by "coordinated with"?
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Is this text designed to appear as a note on press releases? The English is not exactly right, but I also don't really understand what it's trying to say. What do you mean by "coordinated with"?
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it is a job description 
. coordinated with is used in sense to assist with...
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d_sayit is a job descriptionDo you mean that the text is to be attached to a job advertisement? If so, I don't think that "coordinated" or "press release" are right.
"coordinated" (in this sense) refers to a joint action. It doesn't seem likely that the media would "coordinate" with you over such an ad: normally you would just give it to a media out
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Okay. Thank you Mr. Wordy.
How should one write in job description (C.V) that one worked in a media department and used to prepare press release (for Tv and Press) and also to inform the media people to attend the press conference?
How should one write in job description (C.V) that one worked in a media department and used to prepare press release (for Tv and Press) and also to inform the media people to attend the press conference?
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d_sayHow should one write in job description (C.V) that one worked in a media department and used to prepare press release (for Tv and Press) and also to inform the media people to attend the press conference?I'm sorry, I completely misunderstood the context; I had no idea this was for a CV! In that case, "coordinated" and "press release" are OK, but the sent
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Glad to see your reply, yeah you are right and I liked your suggestion the way to say it.
Many thanks for your assistance Mr. Wordy.
Warm Regards,
Many thanks for your assistance Mr. Wordy.
Warm Regards,
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Although I preserved the word "coordinated" from your original, it occurred to me later that it might be simpler just to say:
"Prepared press releases and arranged press conferences."
That's provided "arranged" is a fair description of what you did, of course.
"Prepared press releases and arranged press conferences."
That's provided "arranged" is a fair description of what you did, of course.
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